On the outside she looks calm
She looks like she's in control
On the inside she's falling apart
It's eating away at her soul
Her madness is rising
She can't take it anymore
She needs to scream
She wants to feel her head hit the floor
Sher can't fight these feelings and thoughts
They're always in her head
She can't feel anything
She lying on her bed
She staring at the ceiling
She looking at the floor
Her head wont stop spinning
She can't take it any more
She has the blade in her hand
She closes her eyes
She has the blade on her wrist
But she's too afraid to die
hi, my name is Amber Scott. I am 13 years old and attend ywlcs.I love poetry because it's away to express my feelings. So I hope you enjoy my peotry
Monday, April 27, 2009
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omg!!! i loved it sooooooo much... your a great writer
ReplyDeleteman dat was weak
ReplyDeleteit was not weak..i loved it
ReplyDeleteI agree with Camille and keke. You are a great writer.
ReplyDeleteAnonymous I kno who u are!! And you better watch ur back
ReplyDeleteAMBER your poem is so good....I really understand what your saying in this poem!!!
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